My First Shot at Poetry

Hi...
The Other day i was speaking with a friend of my school days and we were just chatting about our jobs .....
During the conversation i felt that i don't work much at all (w.r.t the time i spent in office and the time i return home after work). Well i sometimes feel i work hard but that's just a feeling :)
Well i don't know is it just coincidence or something that i really wanted to do seriously.. i started getting work at office which was more challenging. The Next day i was jogging early at 5:30 in the morn and was one with myself. It was dark and i could hardly see 5 feet before me clearly and suddenly it all came together and i felt i should express it a different way...
So here goes my first shot at poetry....

Tumhari nazar lag gayi mere kaam par,
Mere ghar jaane ke time par,
Manager ne dena shuru kiya jyada kaam,
Jissse hone laga mera neend haraam,
Pichle teen din se sir phataaa jaa rahaa hain,
Phir bhi chutkara nahi mil raha hain kaam se,
Na paper padhne ka time hain,
Na TV dekhne ka time hain,
Bas kaam hi kaam hain,
Phir bhi kaam karte karte mazaa aaa rahaa hain.

Well its great to have challenging work again after a gap of a month or so...